- I'm not sure if I really shared a story at all, I basically just wrote what I thought about my three favorite books. I also explained how I related to each, or why I enjoyed it so much.
- I believe I explained the stories well in each paragraph.
- My conlucsion could be better, in this sitution I wasn't sure how to put it together.
- The best idea I could come up with is writing about the stories I enjoyed reading, and how I got to reading those stories. From then on out, I just wrote about the books and their plots.
- I used a web tool, and split up each paragraph because they were all about different books.
- I did not use any graphics, but I could of used pictures of the authors, or may the book cover of my three favorite books.
- The authors influenced my writing. I like to follow the steps of my favorite authors. I also used the advice given from my peers with editting.
- I think I need to proof read more, and use other skills to building my story.
Tuesday, February 13, 2007
Taking Stock of Your Work
- I'm not sure if I really shared a story at all, I basically just wrote what I thought about my three favorite books. I also explained how I related to each, or why I enjoyed it so much.
- I believe I explained the stories well in each paragraph.
- My conlucsion could be better, in this sitution I wasn't sure how to put it together.
- The best idea I could come up with is writing about the stories I enjoyed reading, and how I got to reading those stories. From then on out, I just wrote about the books and their plots.
- I used a web tool, and split up each paragraph because they were all about different books.
- I did not use any graphics, but I could of used pictures of the authors, or may the book cover of my three favorite books.
- The authors influenced my writing. I like to follow the steps of my favorite authors. I also used the advice given from my peers with editting.
- I think I need to proof read more, and use other skills to building my story.
- I believe I explained the stories well in each paragraph.
- My conlucsion could be better, in this sitution I wasn't sure how to put it together.
- The best idea I could come up with is writing about the stories I enjoyed reading, and how I got to reading those stories. From then on out, I just wrote about the books and their plots.
- I used a web tool, and split up each paragraph because they were all about different books.
- I did not use any graphics, but I could of used pictures of the authors, or may the book cover of my three favorite books.
- The authors influenced my writing. I like to follow the steps of my favorite authors. I also used the advice given from my peers with editting.
- I think I need to proof read more, and use other skills to building my story.
Wednesday, January 24, 2007
My "Dash!"
My "dash," has changed as time and people have changed. When I was younger I always thought my parents would be the ones who never left my side, and never let a frown appear on my face. As I grew older, sadly, I grew apart from my parents. My strongest relationship leaped to my grandmother, Marie and my younger sister Crystal. I grew up with both and they each taught me so much about life and about myself. My grandma passed away a few years ago, and though my memories stay strong it feels like I've lost a lot. Now in college I've become closer with my Aunt, and even closer with my sister Crystal. I've made tons of friends, and I've kept the old from high school. My family and friends truly have shaped what I have become, and made many experiences unforgettable.
Monday, January 22, 2007
A Gracious Plenty
I believe that Finch (the main character) shows an abnormal side that you don't see in most people, she talks with the dead as if they were alive. In ways I find it weird but on another sence I find it uplifting to know that she can still hold a close relationship with her parents this way. I also believe that Finch finds better friends such as Lucy than she would out in the real world, where most are frightened by her apperance. A connection can be good no matter where you have it.
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